LunacyEcho's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[drowning (AIM)]

but what are u AIMing for

johnfn responds:

oops i pasted the wrong response to your review

[eating ice cream with a cute girl]

this is offesnvie to lactorse intoleratnts

johnfn responds:

http://i.imgur.com/fRygICu.jpg

[stupidly long improv]

lsd did it better

johnfn responds:

[HAMILTON]
Lee, do you yield?

[BURR]
You shot him in the side!
Yes, he yields!

[LAURENS]
I’m satisfied

[BURR]
Yo, we gotta clear the field!

[HAMILTON]
Go! We won

[COMPANY]
Here comes the General!

[BURR]
This should be fun

[WASHINGTON]
What is the meaning of this? Mr. Burr, get a medic for the General

[BURR]
Yes, sir

[WASHINGTON]
Lee, you will never agree with me
But believe me, these young men don’t speak for me
Thank you for your service

[BURR]
Let’s ride!

[WASHINGTON]
Hamilton!

[HAMILTON]
Sir!

[WASHINGTON]
Meet me inside

[COMPANY]
Meet him inside! Meet him inside!
Meet him inside, meet him, meet him inside!

[WASHINGTON]
Son—

[HAMILTON]
Don’t call me son

[WASHINGTON]
This war is hard enough
Withou̺̟͎͚t̟̮̩̤͎̫̘ ̲̠̩̥̮͙̯i͙̣̼͓̭n̗f͙̻͈͉̖̯̰i͇̣̹̘͚̙g̳͎̗h͔̞̣̲͎̹̰t͔̠̭͔̫̬ị̳̱̠̭͓ͅng̣̭͈͓͓̹̙—
̦̫͔͙͎̖̮
͓̭̤̖[HA͎̣͍̲͙MI̫̜̤̼̯L͍̗̺T͚ͅO̟̩N͎̱͉͎̯̜̮]͓̰͕͍̻̱̰
͙L̩̺͕̗̤̫e̺̬͈͓ͅe̼̦̳̳̦̭ ̦̻͉͕̰͈c͔̝̝a͖͖̙͍͎l̫̬̖̝͔̤l̝̼̦͎e͔͓̪̫̻d͓̯ͅ ̠̝̣̬̳ͅy̬̫̫̯o̼̟u͉̱͙ ̜̗̮ou͚̥̘̖̙̣̰t̳͚̖̯̥.͕̬̥̮̘̫̘ ̭W̺̜͍e̳̯͇͍ ̯̜͚͖̩̫c̝̺̗̰͔̟̞ḁ̮̟ll̼e̲͇̘d͓͉̼̻͔̙̖ ̹̖hi͔̘̜s̝̙ ̥̪͕̮̘b̜̘̭̟̥̗lͅu͈̝͈̞f̺̬͙f
ͅ
[̟̩̰̗̦ͅW̬̪A̞̪̳S͍̝̙͖̞̞̣H̭̣̖I̜̦̲̳NG̱̻̟̬̥̠T̘̻̯͍̜O̖̹̘̟̣̰N̦͖͉̲̩]͍̳
͍͖̠̲Y͕ou̺͖͔̫̞ ̹̹͉s̼̙̘̯̪o̗̮̤̦̦̳l͍̹͚͍̪v̼̻̯̳ͅe̲͇̘͈͙̥ ̲̖͇͇n̖̹̦o͕̟͎͉͓t͈̫h̗i͎̖n͚̳̱̺g,͓̫̪̠̣ ̮y͕̥̝͖̯ͅͅo̮̝͓͕̘̦u ͓̬̯̮a̭̩̪͙g̟̤g̤̰̪̥̞̬r̗̰̭͉̝̠̹a̗̟͈̞̳̥v̮͎̲͓̝ͅat̗e̬̬̭͔ͅ ̙̣o͙̤̗̟u̯̦r̥̣̥̖̘͕ͅ ͓͕͉͇͔a̺̪̱̖̣͓̙l͖̫̮̱̻l̺i̳̤e̮̭̤̙͕͉s͕̥̙͇ ͕̼̣͉̩t̞̰͓̫̱o̺͚̭ ̣̳̠̣̥ͅth͇̲e̯ ̩̝̜ș̗o̰̞̠͖̤̼̺u̬͔̭͓̭̠t͕̤h͕̻

̬̝̗̺̙̥[̩͚͇̰̻͔H͎A̬M͔̩̘̟I̹͙̮͈̥ͅL̥̯̩̮T͇̞̠̭͕͖O͍̦̞̞̦N]̲͓̤̫
̮͔Y̱̪̦͖̞o͚u̙̟̺̰͇̗ͅ'̞̰̳r̝̜̰ͅe̪͉̞̹̠ ̥̠̝͍a̙̟̻͈̟b͇͎s̻̬̦̘̼̘̭o̠ͅͅl̺̱̺ụ͎̣̩t͉̙̪̯eḻ̙y r̝̤͍͓i̮̱̹͎̱̙͎g̪͕͇h̥͖̻̠̣t͔͈̖̼̟͈̘,͔͎ ̠̺J̪̻͙͇͙o̼̣͍͓ͅh̙̮̱n͇̯͚̺͍̖̞ ̬̜ͅs͍̖̬͙̺̘h̫͔͇̥o͉̘̞̼̗u͙̪l̪͉̣d̮̰ ͓̘̬͇̲̪̱h̯̦̝ḁv̪̟̻͎͎ͅe ̰̫̞͓̙s̘̬̖̻ḥo̳̟͙t̻͙͖ ̠̖̗h͕͕̠i̪͔͖ͅm͍ i͍̯͍͚͎n̜ ͕͓̱̩͇̜͎t̖h̭̥̙̹ͅe̘̟̜̞̠͓̥ ̜̣͎̹̗m͇̦o͙̫̩̪̙̹u̖̠̺̦̺̮t̙̘͈̙̜h̺̯̤̳̰͖
͚͚͈̙Ṭh͖a͈̣̗̖̗̺͖t̼͍͈͕͉̤ ̠͎̞͙wo̰͈u͙͍̞l͓̟̱̤d̘̩̖’̠̥̱v̺̬̺͓̲ͅe̪̫̥̝̩̘̣ ̘̳s͙͕͓̗̖̮h͉͖̜̤̩͈u̮͕̤̲̬̺̦t ̺͖̻̣h͚̮͖̭̼̣i̺̱̜͓͎ͅm̫̼̹̺ ͔̣̠͍̰̠ͅu̗̻͕̣p͚̼̯̻͈̖

̝͖̠̩[̣̣̜W̟A̳̩̞̱͙̝SH̦̠̭͕IN͙̟G̩͈̦̙̱̣T̖̲͉̰O͈̙͍͖̹̼̟N̪̹̹̭͕]̜̦̠̲̬̜ͅ
͎̖̠̖S̜̱̪ͅo̱̮n̘̖—͎̫̬̭ͅ
͓͇̜̥͔̘͉
[̠̰̹H̝̯̳̙̭̥͖A͕͈͙M̫̞̬̠I̙͈L͈͉̤T̰̘O̟̖͍̳N͙̪̠̪͎]̥
̥̗̗̭̹͉̭I̥̪̱’̟̯̹̯m̤͇ ͈̺̞͇n͍̼o̹͇͈t͈̲̮c̥̺̜̬ͅh̗͔̥̘̙̫a͉͇̥͈̪ ͓̝so̗n̯—̣̭
͇
̟͎̥̫ͅͅͅ[̭̙̟W͙͖̲̙̤̱A̖̜̮̱̖S̜͚HI̫͈̺̞͉̲͇N͍͔̠G̜̤̠T̺O̻̲̞͇̬N̯̺̹̯͚]̯̳̭
̱̳̦̳̼W̞͚̪͔͚̯̟a̳̯t͔͓͈̥c̪̮͕̜h̻ͅ ̮̗̻͓̥͔y̥̥̭̠o͇͎̰̥̖u̙r̯͎̰̙̗̪̯ ̫̦̥̠̞͎̙t̗̹̘o̫̭̲n̦e̯̪̫̲
̝͇̣͇ͅI̟̣̱̘ ̭̞͓̲a̺̱m̭̼͚͈ ̘̖͇͉n̠̟̱o͉̩͕͕t̲͓ a̬̻̙͈ ̖͙m͖̫̖͚͍͚̫a̫̣̥i̱̪ͅd̖e̘̭̼̦̙̪n̰̩ ͕̲̳̰̤i͖ͅn̠̤̮̳̯ ̥n͍͓ͅe̠̥̩̩͍e̗̹͕̤͈̟d̲͉̗̰̳͔̪ ̖͖͈͓͖̥̘o̗̘͈̞f̜̠̘̝͕͈͎ ̦̤̼̬̮d͈̩e̠̩f͚̝̣̩̝̬̫e̩̬n̮di̮̤n̙͙̫̯ͅg,͕̼͍ ̘I̯͓͉̹͉ ͈̣̫̝̼a̱̜̩m̝̲͇̙̳̺͎ g̤̙r̹̳̯͈͍o̰̯̰͕w̮̜̣͚̮͇ṉ͔̭͎̤̜
̰̮͔̦̥͓
͈̭̺̳̞̼̪[H̯̞̭̘A̲̥̥̟̗̲̹M̹̬̱ỊLTỌ̟̝͈N̯̘̪̤ ̫(̻̼̱͍OV͚̰͖̫̝Ẹ̬R̦͍̜͓L̤͖̤A͕̳͙̩̮̗P̜̘͓̩̻PIṈ̘G̲̠̼)͖͍͇͚̼]
̻̖C͙h̩̤̥̟̳̰̯a͙͙̣͍r̰l̰̩̖es̬̬̦̯̺̮ ͔͇̟L͇̠e̝̭̘̩̭̥e͇̤̪̻̠̲,͚͍̬̗̫ ͓̰̘̖Th̤̺̺̜͚o͉̼̣̭̘̣͇m̺̠̜as̳̖ C̜̥̦̪̟o̤nw͖̞a̮̬y͓̻͈
̘͎͚̥̪̪T͍̤͇̼̦̱h̠̣̟̻ͅe͖̗sẹ ͈̺̪̩͈̗͙m̯̹̠͈e̻̥̣̼̣ṉ͈̗͙̩ ͔͙̞̠t̝͔̣a͖k͚̰̩̱̫̤e̙̫ y͎͈̙̤̩ou͙r̯ ̣n͍̼͖a̪̘m̻̝ẹ̼̖ a͍̞̺̭̭n̼̣̹d͙̙̘̣ ̼͈͈̲̭̮ͅt̻͙h̠e̱͍̻̝͓͇͎y̳̹̱̣̤̳͈ ̣̖̘͖̣̘̬r̻̩̼̭͚a͕̘͓͙ke̘͔̹̤̖̘̹ ̺̦͙̺i̘̻͓̠͔̣t
̘̭̲̱̖̺Th̫̼̬͔r̺̣͕o̲͔̗u̺̦g̭̞͇͍̥̰h̠͈̳̬̯͖ ̫̫̝̣̟̥ͅṯ̱h͇͙̠̞͉͚e̻ ̬̠̞͚m͎̜̱̟u̖͙̦͓͚̞̙d͚̦
̳͚̫̜
̪[̣̘̱̞̭ͅW͓͍̮̮͖̝͚A̠͈SH̠͓͚I͍̞̯N͉GT̬̙̯̭͈O̲̼̤̘N̤̯̣̦͍̗͖]̖̝̥̫̠
M̜̼y ͖̗͎͔͔ͅna̘̖͇̱m̝e̗̮’̱s ̖͙̘̳b͈̗̭͎͈̮̻e̟͈ḛn͉̻̥̠̪̣͔ ͓̲t̩̥̲̻̙͈h̲̫̖̲̪̱ͅr̹͖̲̟ͅo̹̦͓̤u͚̖̣̬̗͙ͅg̯̪͍̲͚͕̦h ͔̰̫̟a͇̰̥̤ ͉͉͍̠͇̩l͚ot͍͈̪̟̪̥,̙͇ ̬͉̠̪̯̲I̭ ̳͚̬̞c̤̳a̖̪͉̜̼n͕ ̩͎̦̼̘t̥̩̳ak̘̟̖e̩ ̞̰̠i͚̥̭t̟
͙̥͓͙ͅ
[̥̙HA̤̻͍͚M̹͔̝͈͍͎ͅI̞͕̥̮̱̬Ḷ͍̖͚̗T̳̲͔̗O̻̯͉̯N̗̥̘]̥̝
W̹͎̟̼͇̜e͚̺̞l̗̩̼͓̪̼ͅl̥̳̖̪,̪̰ ͈̬͔͚̬I̯̹̭̞̗ ̳͚͔̱͔͉̟d̙o̞̜n̩̖’̫̼͕t͎͇͙ ̪̜͚h̼̣͖av͓̼e ͈̖̜̫̤yo̯͎̞̟̘͇u̬ͅr͚̤̜͍ ͎̲̲̫n̹a̙̤̯͕̻̰me͇̤̩̟̗.̮̤̜̘͉ͅ ̥͉͎̱̩I̖͕̘͇ ͉̱̦̤d͉̳̙̣̘̜o̜̱̣̭͈͚̭n͚̠̪̥̻̫’̖͖t ̱h͍̳̙͖a̲̬̲̯v̝̤e̻͖͇̦̦̣ y̰o̜̹̮͙̪̱̤u͇̼r̰̯̰͙̳ͅ ͕̙̘̱̳̬ti̱͖͇̺̥̻͉t̟̫̯̣̜l͎es̟̠̙̘̪
I̙͙̞̭̙̲ d͈̝̭̬̖o͇̭̥̼n̫͚͉’͔̳̗̪͉̟t ͎̥̱̤̘h͓a̯̥͚̳̻v̹͖̜͓e ̮y̫̻̬̱͕o̪̺̳u̟̮̞̫ͅr̺̜̥ ̥̗̪l͚a̝͍̯̭n̹͔̩d̮̬̺
̹B̖̰u͎̗̼̭̬t,̮̘͈ ͉̖̫̺̩͈͓i̮̥̠̜̲f͎̮̬͓ ͈y̪̳̠̗͎͖̻o̲͙̱͙̭u—̬̪͉̳̝̺̞
͓̩̗͍͍
̟[̪̳̱͚̠W̤̜̰̜̥͍͓A̘̪͍̩S̺̺̲̮H̹̬I̻̝N͓G̳̟̻T̮̻̰͇̹̬ON̙]ͅ
̗̖͓̭̘̩N͍̮̤̺̞̬o̯̬ͅ—̝͍̺

[rural home]

i hope this is helpful

johnfn responds:

This is really fun. :>

> You're a lot kinder than johnfn when it comes to judging sound design, it seems. :P
YEP. I still don't like the sound design at all. That's my biggest complaint. Seriously, just write a chiptune song. I would be soo happy :>

Also, I want to take a comb to some of your melodies and tighten them up a little. Sometimes, particularly at the ends of little melodies, you use a few too many notes. It seems redundant, like you're over-explaining the melody. It might be a fun exercise for you to try to take off a couple of notes on the end of random melodies, to see if the point still gets across (or is improved).

This is one heck of a step up, though. The 1:30 transition and then the triplet section is so good :3 Kind of reminds me of Waterflame actually, he used triplets all over the place lolz.

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LunacyEcho responds:

=> sound design =>

Well... (tbh though there are lots of sounds here that i don't particularly like, either, especially that chordy synth at 1:51 :P)

=> chiptune =>

Okay, okay! Ironically, sound design is one of the things that scares me the most about chiptune though, since I can never get any of the tracks to sound chippy enough. :D

=> ends of melodies =>

Y'know, I've actually never thought of doing that before. :P Now that you mention it, it sounds like such a natural thing to do! I guess I really like sixteenth notes or something :D I am DEFINITELY doing this for my next few tracks.

=> Waterflame =>

Hoo man, that guy is one of my biggest inspirations (at the top of a long list including you, ofc). I'm honored to hear you say that! :D

Thanks for the review! And I hope you get your musical mojo back soon so you can go back to uploading ear candy into the Internet! :D

:>

[nebula blender]

review

johnfn responds:

"response" reponse

[REALITY GLITCH AUTOMATON]

My life was forever changed when I realized the word 'automaton' contains the word 'tomato'

johnfn responds:

AUTO TOMATO AUTOMATOR was a considered title

[Lunacy]

Approve.

JDawg00100 responds:

Would it be officially weird if I named my next song Echo? :P

[my friends are no help]

My favorite part was the last crash cymbal

johnfn responds:

Believe it or not but that was a mistake but then I heard it and laughed a lot so I kept it in.

[We Love Bavaria]

Hello from Berlin! (for now :P)

Man, this is by far my favorite track from this year's NGAUC. It is consistently the only track that puts a smile on my face every single time I hear it. You truly are a master of genres! :D

I just really love all the attention to detail you put into your tracks. While it may be somewhat short, the meticulous attention given to the velocities of every note and the background ambience of a happy Bavarian village just win me over. Great work and good luck in the competition! Not that you'll need it. :)

[UNHOLY CACE]

Omg if this is what it takes to motivate you to write awesome awesome music I should have more birthdays :D:D

THANK YOU!!

johnfn responds:

BIRTHDAYS ALL YEAR!