It's a great song with a bit of cool flavor, but felt that this song was a bit drier than your normal 'muffled techno' songs, like NightSquad or the Gamegrumps Gojira Remix. I just felt that it was too repetitive for the SFX to relieve me of the repetition. In some songs, you pull it off wonderfully, but not so much in this one. I mean, from 0:14 to 0:37, it was the exact same sounds on drums and bass, looped for about 30 measures, without so much as even a chord change! However, the SFX during parts such as those, while way too quiet, were very well-done and I wish they'd been louder. You used the Western sounds well, and I could tell what you were trying to show with them.
If you were trying to write a top-notch or a death match-winning song, this isn't it. But, as gadogry said, for an experimental piece, it's brilliant. I've never heard you make this sort of music before, so it's natural that it shouldn't be as good as some of the stuff you're more comfortable or have more experience with. Great work.