LunacyEcho's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hamulndurrtale]

u guys sound dumb

johnfn responds:

i didnt actually write this, it was some other guy

[Johnfn's Low Budget Cooking Show]

it has got a bouncy

johnfn responds:

egg

[drowning (AIM)]

but what are u AIMing for

johnfn responds:

oops i pasted the wrong response to your review

[eating ice cream with a cute girl]

this is offesnvie to lactorse intoleratnts

johnfn responds:

http://i.imgur.com/fRygICu.jpg

[stupidly long improv]

lsd did it better

johnfn responds:

[HAMILTON]
Lee, do you yield?

[BURR]
You shot him in the side!
Yes, he yields!

[LAURENS]
I’m satisfied

[BURR]
Yo, we gotta clear the field!

[HAMILTON]
Go! We won

[COMPANY]
Here comes the General!

[BURR]
This should be fun

[WASHINGTON]
What is the meaning of this? Mr. Burr, get a medic for the General

[BURR]
Yes, sir

[WASHINGTON]
Lee, you will never agree with me
But believe me, these young men don’t speak for me
Thank you for your service

[BURR]
Let’s ride!

[WASHINGTON]
Hamilton!

[HAMILTON]
Sir!

[WASHINGTON]
Meet me inside

[COMPANY]
Meet him inside! Meet him inside!
Meet him inside, meet him, meet him inside!

[WASHINGTON]
Son—

[HAMILTON]
Don’t call me son

[WASHINGTON]
This war is hard enough
Withou̺̟͎͚t̟̮̩̤͎̫̘ ̲̠̩̥̮͙̯i͙̣̼͓̭n̗f͙̻͈͉̖̯̰i͇̣̹̘͚̙g̳͎̗h͔̞̣̲͎̹̰t͔̠̭͔̫̬ị̳̱̠̭͓ͅng̣̭͈͓͓̹̙—
̦̫͔͙͎̖̮
͓̭̤̖[HA͎̣͍̲͙MI̫̜̤̼̯L͍̗̺T͚ͅO̟̩N͎̱͉͎̯̜̮]͓̰͕͍̻̱̰
͙L̩̺͕̗̤̫e̺̬͈͓ͅe̼̦̳̳̦̭ ̦̻͉͕̰͈c͔̝̝a͖͖̙͍͎l̫̬̖̝͔̤l̝̼̦͎e͔͓̪̫̻d͓̯ͅ ̠̝̣̬̳ͅy̬̫̫̯o̼̟u͉̱͙ ̜̗̮ou͚̥̘̖̙̣̰t̳͚̖̯̥.͕̬̥̮̘̫̘ ̭W̺̜͍e̳̯͇͍ ̯̜͚͖̩̫c̝̺̗̰͔̟̞ḁ̮̟ll̼e̲͇̘d͓͉̼̻͔̙̖ ̹̖hi͔̘̜s̝̙ ̥̪͕̮̘b̜̘̭̟̥̗lͅu͈̝͈̞f̺̬͙f
ͅ
[̟̩̰̗̦ͅW̬̪A̞̪̳S͍̝̙͖̞̞̣H̭̣̖I̜̦̲̳NG̱̻̟̬̥̠T̘̻̯͍̜O̖̹̘̟̣̰N̦͖͉̲̩]͍̳
͍͖̠̲Y͕ou̺͖͔̫̞ ̹̹͉s̼̙̘̯̪o̗̮̤̦̦̳l͍̹͚͍̪v̼̻̯̳ͅe̲͇̘͈͙̥ ̲̖͇͇n̖̹̦o͕̟͎͉͓t͈̫h̗i͎̖n͚̳̱̺g,͓̫̪̠̣ ̮y͕̥̝͖̯ͅͅo̮̝͓͕̘̦u ͓̬̯̮a̭̩̪͙g̟̤g̤̰̪̥̞̬r̗̰̭͉̝̠̹a̗̟͈̞̳̥v̮͎̲͓̝ͅat̗e̬̬̭͔ͅ ̙̣o͙̤̗̟u̯̦r̥̣̥̖̘͕ͅ ͓͕͉͇͔a̺̪̱̖̣͓̙l͖̫̮̱̻l̺i̳̤e̮̭̤̙͕͉s͕̥̙͇ ͕̼̣͉̩t̞̰͓̫̱o̺͚̭ ̣̳̠̣̥ͅth͇̲e̯ ̩̝̜ș̗o̰̞̠͖̤̼̺u̬͔̭͓̭̠t͕̤h͕̻

̬̝̗̺̙̥[̩͚͇̰̻͔H͎A̬M͔̩̘̟I̹͙̮͈̥ͅL̥̯̩̮T͇̞̠̭͕͖O͍̦̞̞̦N]̲͓̤̫
̮͔Y̱̪̦͖̞o͚u̙̟̺̰͇̗ͅ'̞̰̳r̝̜̰ͅe̪͉̞̹̠ ̥̠̝͍a̙̟̻͈̟b͇͎s̻̬̦̘̼̘̭o̠ͅͅl̺̱̺ụ͎̣̩t͉̙̪̯eḻ̙y r̝̤͍͓i̮̱̹͎̱̙͎g̪͕͇h̥͖̻̠̣t͔͈̖̼̟͈̘,͔͎ ̠̺J̪̻͙͇͙o̼̣͍͓ͅh̙̮̱n͇̯͚̺͍̖̞ ̬̜ͅs͍̖̬͙̺̘h̫͔͇̥o͉̘̞̼̗u͙̪l̪͉̣d̮̰ ͓̘̬͇̲̪̱h̯̦̝ḁv̪̟̻͎͎ͅe ̰̫̞͓̙s̘̬̖̻ḥo̳̟͙t̻͙͖ ̠̖̗h͕͕̠i̪͔͖ͅm͍ i͍̯͍͚͎n̜ ͕͓̱̩͇̜͎t̖h̭̥̙̹ͅe̘̟̜̞̠͓̥ ̜̣͎̹̗m͇̦o͙̫̩̪̙̹u̖̠̺̦̺̮t̙̘͈̙̜h̺̯̤̳̰͖
͚͚͈̙Ṭh͖a͈̣̗̖̗̺͖t̼͍͈͕͉̤ ̠͎̞͙wo̰͈u͙͍̞l͓̟̱̤d̘̩̖’̠̥̱v̺̬̺͓̲ͅe̪̫̥̝̩̘̣ ̘̳s͙͕͓̗̖̮h͉͖̜̤̩͈u̮͕̤̲̬̺̦t ̺͖̻̣h͚̮͖̭̼̣i̺̱̜͓͎ͅm̫̼̹̺ ͔̣̠͍̰̠ͅu̗̻͕̣p͚̼̯̻͈̖

̝͖̠̩[̣̣̜W̟A̳̩̞̱͙̝SH̦̠̭͕IN͙̟G̩͈̦̙̱̣T̖̲͉̰O͈̙͍͖̹̼̟N̪̹̹̭͕]̜̦̠̲̬̜ͅ
͎̖̠̖S̜̱̪ͅo̱̮n̘̖—͎̫̬̭ͅ
͓͇̜̥͔̘͉
[̠̰̹H̝̯̳̙̭̥͖A͕͈͙M̫̞̬̠I̙͈L͈͉̤T̰̘O̟̖͍̳N͙̪̠̪͎]̥
̥̗̗̭̹͉̭I̥̪̱’̟̯̹̯m̤͇ ͈̺̞͇n͍̼o̹͇͈t͈̲̮c̥̺̜̬ͅh̗͔̥̘̙̫a͉͇̥͈̪ ͓̝so̗n̯—̣̭
͇
̟͎̥̫ͅͅͅ[̭̙̟W͙͖̲̙̤̱A̖̜̮̱̖S̜͚HI̫͈̺̞͉̲͇N͍͔̠G̜̤̠T̺O̻̲̞͇̬N̯̺̹̯͚]̯̳̭
̱̳̦̳̼W̞͚̪͔͚̯̟a̳̯t͔͓͈̥c̪̮͕̜h̻ͅ ̮̗̻͓̥͔y̥̥̭̠o͇͎̰̥̖u̙r̯͎̰̙̗̪̯ ̫̦̥̠̞͎̙t̗̹̘o̫̭̲n̦e̯̪̫̲
̝͇̣͇ͅI̟̣̱̘ ̭̞͓̲a̺̱m̭̼͚͈ ̘̖͇͉n̠̟̱o͉̩͕͕t̲͓ a̬̻̙͈ ̖͙m͖̫̖͚͍͚̫a̫̣̥i̱̪ͅd̖e̘̭̼̦̙̪n̰̩ ͕̲̳̰̤i͖ͅn̠̤̮̳̯ ̥n͍͓ͅe̠̥̩̩͍e̗̹͕̤͈̟d̲͉̗̰̳͔̪ ̖͖͈͓͖̥̘o̗̘͈̞f̜̠̘̝͕͈͎ ̦̤̼̬̮d͈̩e̠̩f͚̝̣̩̝̬̫e̩̬n̮di̮̤n̙͙̫̯ͅg,͕̼͍ ̘I̯͓͉̹͉ ͈̣̫̝̼a̱̜̩m̝̲͇̙̳̺͎ g̤̙r̹̳̯͈͍o̰̯̰͕w̮̜̣͚̮͇ṉ͔̭͎̤̜
̰̮͔̦̥͓
͈̭̺̳̞̼̪[H̯̞̭̘A̲̥̥̟̗̲̹M̹̬̱ỊLTỌ̟̝͈N̯̘̪̤ ̫(̻̼̱͍OV͚̰͖̫̝Ẹ̬R̦͍̜͓L̤͖̤A͕̳͙̩̮̗P̜̘͓̩̻PIṈ̘G̲̠̼)͖͍͇͚̼]
̻̖C͙h̩̤̥̟̳̰̯a͙͙̣͍r̰l̰̩̖es̬̬̦̯̺̮ ͔͇̟L͇̠e̝̭̘̩̭̥e͇̤̪̻̠̲,͚͍̬̗̫ ͓̰̘̖Th̤̺̺̜͚o͉̼̣̭̘̣͇m̺̠̜as̳̖ C̜̥̦̪̟o̤nw͖̞a̮̬y͓̻͈
̘͎͚̥̪̪T͍̤͇̼̦̱h̠̣̟̻ͅe͖̗sẹ ͈̺̪̩͈̗͙m̯̹̠͈e̻̥̣̼̣ṉ͈̗͙̩ ͔͙̞̠t̝͔̣a͖k͚̰̩̱̫̤e̙̫ y͎͈̙̤̩ou͙r̯ ̣n͍̼͖a̪̘m̻̝ẹ̼̖ a͍̞̺̭̭n̼̣̹d͙̙̘̣ ̼͈͈̲̭̮ͅt̻͙h̠e̱͍̻̝͓͇͎y̳̹̱̣̤̳͈ ̣̖̘͖̣̘̬r̻̩̼̭͚a͕̘͓͙ke̘͔̹̤̖̘̹ ̺̦͙̺i̘̻͓̠͔̣t
̘̭̲̱̖̺Th̫̼̬͔r̺̣͕o̲͔̗u̺̦g̭̞͇͍̥̰h̠͈̳̬̯͖ ̫̫̝̣̟̥ͅṯ̱h͇͙̠̞͉͚e̻ ̬̠̞͚m͎̜̱̟u̖͙̦͓͚̞̙d͚̦
̳͚̫̜
̪[̣̘̱̞̭ͅW͓͍̮̮͖̝͚A̠͈SH̠͓͚I͍̞̯N͉GT̬̙̯̭͈O̲̼̤̘N̤̯̣̦͍̗͖]̖̝̥̫̠
M̜̼y ͖̗͎͔͔ͅna̘̖͇̱m̝e̗̮’̱s ̖͙̘̳b͈̗̭͎͈̮̻e̟͈ḛn͉̻̥̠̪̣͔ ͓̲t̩̥̲̻̙͈h̲̫̖̲̪̱ͅr̹͖̲̟ͅo̹̦͓̤u͚̖̣̬̗͙ͅg̯̪͍̲͚͕̦h ͔̰̫̟a͇̰̥̤ ͉͉͍̠͇̩l͚ot͍͈̪̟̪̥,̙͇ ̬͉̠̪̯̲I̭ ̳͚̬̞c̤̳a̖̪͉̜̼n͕ ̩͎̦̼̘t̥̩̳ak̘̟̖e̩ ̞̰̠i͚̥̭t̟
͙̥͓͙ͅ
[̥̙HA̤̻͍͚M̹͔̝͈͍͎ͅI̞͕̥̮̱̬Ḷ͍̖͚̗T̳̲͔̗O̻̯͉̯N̗̥̘]̥̝
W̹͎̟̼͇̜e͚̺̞l̗̩̼͓̪̼ͅl̥̳̖̪,̪̰ ͈̬͔͚̬I̯̹̭̞̗ ̳͚͔̱͔͉̟d̙o̞̜n̩̖’̫̼͕t͎͇͙ ̪̜͚h̼̣͖av͓̼e ͈̖̜̫̤yo̯͎̞̟̘͇u̬ͅr͚̤̜͍ ͎̲̲̫n̹a̙̤̯͕̻̰me͇̤̩̟̗.̮̤̜̘͉ͅ ̥͉͎̱̩I̖͕̘͇ ͉̱̦̤d͉̳̙̣̘̜o̜̱̣̭͈͚̭n͚̠̪̥̻̫’̖͖t ̱h͍̳̙͖a̲̬̲̯v̝̤e̻͖͇̦̦̣ y̰o̜̹̮͙̪̱̤u͇̼r̰̯̰͙̳ͅ ͕̙̘̱̳̬ti̱͖͇̺̥̻͉t̟̫̯̣̜l͎es̟̠̙̘̪
I̙͙̞̭̙̲ d͈̝̭̬̖o͇̭̥̼n̫͚͉’͔̳̗̪͉̟t ͎̥̱̤̘h͓a̯̥͚̳̻v̹͖̜͓e ̮y̫̻̬̱͕o̪̺̳u̟̮̞̫ͅr̺̜̥ ̥̗̪l͚a̝͍̯̭n̹͔̩d̮̬̺
̹B̖̰u͎̗̼̭̬t,̮̘͈ ͉̖̫̺̩͈͓i̮̥̠̜̲f͎̮̬͓ ͈y̪̳̠̗͎͖̻o̲͙̱͙̭u—̬̪͉̳̝̺̞
͓̩̗͍͍
̟[̪̳̱͚̠W̤̜̰̜̥͍͓A̘̪͍̩S̺̺̲̮H̹̬I̻̝N͓G̳̟̻T̮̻̰͇̹̬ON̙]ͅ
̗̖͓̭̘̩N͍̮̤̺̞̬o̯̬ͅ—̝͍̺

[rural home]

i hope this is helpful

johnfn responds:

This is really fun. :>

> You're a lot kinder than johnfn when it comes to judging sound design, it seems. :P
YEP. I still don't like the sound design at all. That's my biggest complaint. Seriously, just write a chiptune song. I would be soo happy :>

Also, I want to take a comb to some of your melodies and tighten them up a little. Sometimes, particularly at the ends of little melodies, you use a few too many notes. It seems redundant, like you're over-explaining the melody. It might be a fun exercise for you to try to take off a couple of notes on the end of random melodies, to see if the point still gets across (or is improved).

This is one heck of a step up, though. The 1:30 transition and then the triplet section is so good :3 Kind of reminds me of Waterflame actually, he used triplets all over the place lolz.

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LunacyEcho responds:

=> sound design =>

Well... (tbh though there are lots of sounds here that i don't particularly like, either, especially that chordy synth at 1:51 :P)

=> chiptune =>

Okay, okay! Ironically, sound design is one of the things that scares me the most about chiptune though, since I can never get any of the tracks to sound chippy enough. :D

=> ends of melodies =>

Y'know, I've actually never thought of doing that before. :P Now that you mention it, it sounds like such a natural thing to do! I guess I really like sixteenth notes or something :D I am DEFINITELY doing this for my next few tracks.

=> Waterflame =>

Hoo man, that guy is one of my biggest inspirations (at the top of a long list including you, ofc). I'm honored to hear you say that! :D

Thanks for the review! And I hope you get your musical mojo back soon so you can go back to uploading ear candy into the Internet! :D

:>

[nebula blender]

review

johnfn responds:

"response" reponse

[REALITY GLITCH AUTOMATON]

My life was forever changed when I realized the word 'automaton' contains the word 'tomato'

johnfn responds:

AUTO TOMATO AUTOMATOR was a considered title

[Lunacy]

Approve.

JDawg00100 responds:

Would it be officially weird if I named my next song Echo? :P

[my friends are no help]

My favorite part was the last crash cymbal

johnfn responds:

Believe it or not but that was a mistake but then I heard it and laughed a lot so I kept it in.